Hello. I'm mostly making this blog just so I can have one, but I also would like your opinion on something. I'm writhing this story called Brawl, and I wanted to see what you think of it so far:
Chapter One- Punishment
A cold bead of sweat trickled down Barnes’ face as the trialman lead him and his brother into the judgeroom.
The judgeroom was icy cold, and the boys could see their quick breaths in the air. The walls were chipping, and the entire room was made of gray cement. At the end of the hall sat a plump, stubby man wearing a dark purple tunic. As the brothers sat in their wretched seats, the trialman took his place next to the fat man.
“Parchander and Barnhules Marn”, the fat man bellowed, his voice echoing off the walls.
Parch looked sa…
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